
At 4/30/25 01:57 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Constructive criticism is welcomed

I'm impressed. The characters' faces could use a lil work though.
At 5/11/25 03:03 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:I'm impressed. The characters' faces could use a lil work though.
How so specifically?
At 5/13/25 06:28 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 5/11/25 03:03 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:I'm impressed. The characters' faces could use a lil work though.
How so specifically?
Like, they could be a little more expressive and whatnot. But overall, the rest of the art is great. Keep up the good work
At 5/13/25 03:46 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:At 5/13/25 06:28 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 5/11/25 03:03 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:I'm impressed. The characters' faces could use a lil work though.
How so specifically?
Like, they could be a little more expressive and whatnot. But overall, the rest of the art is great. Keep up the good work
Gotcha 👍
At 5/13/25 06:52 PM, BJay653 wrote:At 5/13/25 03:46 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:At 5/13/25 06:28 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 5/11/25 03:03 PM, ComedyBro88 wrote:I'm impressed. The characters' faces could use a lil work though.
How so specifically?
Like, they could be a little more expressive and whatnot. But overall, the rest of the art is great. Keep up the good work
Gotcha 👍
Glad I could help!
At 5/5/25 11:45 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 4/30/25 01:57 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Constructive criticism is welcomed

At 5/5/25 11:45 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 4/30/25 01:57 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Constructive criticism is welcomed

Use references (pornstars since this type of pose is common on porn stuff), break down the body into basic shapes, and do thumbnail sketches first to get the overall look of it before dwelling deep in it (it's also warm up practice habit). Just study anatomy and do gesture drawings of nude models as it will train your mind/eye to notice what the human body can do right. That way you can break those rules with understanding. Even the beanmouth heads still have basic shapes you need to know when drawing the head.
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At 5/14/25 06:09 PM, Metropoloxx wrote:At 5/5/25 11:45 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 4/30/25 01:57 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Constructive criticism is welcomed
Use references (pornstars since this type of pose is common on porn stuff), break down the body into basic shapes, and do thumbnail sketches first to get the overall look of it before dwelling deep in it (it's also warm up practice habit). Just study anatomy and do gesture drawings of nude models as it will train your mind/eye to notice what the human body can do right. That way you can break those rules with understanding. Even the beanmouth heads still have basic shapes you need to know when drawing the head.
Will do 👍
At 5/14/25 08:08 PM, BJay653 wrote:At 5/14/25 06:09 PM, Metropoloxx wrote:At 5/5/25 11:45 AM, BJay653 wrote:At 4/30/25 01:57 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Constructive criticism is welcomed
Use references (pornstars since this type of pose is common on porn stuff), break down the body into basic shapes, and do thumbnail sketches first to get the overall look of it before dwelling deep in it (it's also warm up practice habit). Just study anatomy and do gesture drawings of nude models as it will train your mind/eye to notice what the human body can do right. That way you can break those rules with understanding. Even the beanmouth heads still have basic shapes you need to know when drawing the head.
Will do 👍

Human Piper from Robots singing in the shower
At 7/17/25 11:55 PM, depresyon wrote:bro just let the pen go
Why would I do that?
bro just dont draw porn you draw like shit literaly everything is off
At 7/19/25 01:15 AM, depresyon wrote:bro just dont draw porn you draw like shit literaly everything is off
Not constructive or fair. Either say something that actually helps me improve as an artist or don't say anything at all. We're supposed to look out for one another here on Newgrounds. This kind of attitude is not welcomed here -.-
At 7/14/25 05:18 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Dude chowder and Panini are fuckin CHILDREN.
RAVE TO THE GRAVE
At 7/30/25 06:04 AM, UNCLEREGZ wrote:At 7/14/25 05:18 PM, BJay653 wrote:
Dude chowder and Panini are fuckin CHILDREN.
Dude, we saw them as adults in the final episode of the show. Fucking chill -.-