I'd increase the size of the text, bolden it, to make it more readable. Also, quicken the genie dialog. Make climing/jumping faster. Getting up a tower is tedious and boring. Animation quality is good.
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"Master, help me seal away all of the Demons. In exchange, i will help you to grant your wishes with The Greatest Lamp" Jin.
The greatest Lamp is a Hentai fan game with simple, single level platformer with melee combat and RNG loot system.
You will play as Widowmaker. She woke up in white Void after get saved by Red immortal being named Jin. She's asking your help to rebuild A Hell Gates and seal the Demons who enslaved Humans and makes them almost extinct.
There's 2 game section in this game. First is platformer, and second is Camp.
How to play Platformer part :
-A and D or virtual analog to move left and right
-S or analog down to descend
-Space or arrow up icon to jump
-E or hand icon to pickup highlighted object
-Q or heart icon to heal
-Left mouse button or sword icon to attack
-Exit button to end an expedition
How to play Camp part :
-E or hand icon to interact with Jin
-Left mouse button or touch to proceed to the next dialogue line.
-Right mouse button to Zoom in when not in dialogue mode, and skip dialogue scroll
-Ok button(mobile) to skip dialogue scroll and confirm.
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Credits :
-NSFW SFX by shinlalalas
-Moan Voice by Gia F. Simone
-Platformer Voice by Cici Frye
risqi-pan responds:
Thank you for playing :) and i thanks for the feedback, this was my first platformer game and i'm still unsure about everything and any feedback will help me to makes this project better and better.
The chicken didn’t lay an egg on it:( but it’s a great start
risqi-pan responds:
Thank you for playing :) i'm still figuring out how to do that, so i will add that features when i know how to do that
This is honestly a great start for the project. Aside from the bugs mentioned in the previews comments my only niche is that the dialogue feels to slow to appear (i am a fast reader).
I would suggest either make it so the dialogue shows up faster or that you let us make it so the dialogue show up instantly.
risqi-pan responds:
Thank you for playing :) yeah, i might will try to change the dialogue speed.
I love seeing you learn new aspects of game design, and implementing more physical gameplay seem to activate sympathetic parts of my brain and get me more involved in the feeling of the other parts of the game!
The platforming sections are a little janky, the game doesn't like it if you hold the jump button; but as a draft or a practice project i love the vision!
I suggest finding a way to practice your english copywriting or finding an editor with a different perspective on the language from yours, some of the dialogue feels stilted or broken in a way that can be disruptive to the native speaker's experience.
Please continue developing your art and craft, you have a lot of potential room to grow as a h-game dev <3
risqi-pan responds:
Thank you for playing :) for the jump mechanics, it's actually a hit and miss design because i'm using character animation's spesific frames to trigger the jump. Sometimes it won't jump because the game engine skip the jumping logic and sometimes it will clip to the platform, which i'm still trying to find a way to fix the jump, and it will also bug the camera.
I'm still practicing english on a regular basis, but it's kinda hard to find a good source for learning because most English course and book in my country is British.
And thank you for your feedback!
Good game, the there are two bugs I noticed: When falling from a platform, the heroine doesn't always fall, all the way, she sometimes stays suspended and keeps running in mid air (can usually be remedied by pressing s or jumping again). More frequently, she does fall but the camera doesn't follow her all the way down (remedied by jumping). Also, just a question,do we get more options in the camp after accumulating a certain amount of hell shards?
risqi-pan responds:
Thank you for playing :). I'm still trying to fix the bugs. But running in mid air is not a bug, it was secret platform to go from 1 tower to another without dealing with Mummies, you're lucky if you find one because i placed them randomly in between some towers.
And about the camera, It's quite difficult bug to fix because i'm forcing the camera to makes the character feet touch lower side of the screen and falling makes the camera fail to track the character position. But for now, jumping can fix the camera.
For now, we only have limited option because this game is served as a demo and I'm still figuring out what will work and what will fail.
But try giving Jin flowers 10 times and see what will happen :)