I have some feedback if u wanna hear it!

Oh, I kissed you once again On the lips, felt the same It instantly brought the pain You stayed on, hidden far in my brain I can’t erase the stain This time I won’t let you reign You won’t see me come back, you hear me, I just fell for a sec I was lonely and sad and angry I just needed a break Why do you stay so easy baby If I want you, I get If I want you, I get you quickly How did I stay so safe You won’t see me come back, you hear me, I just fell for a sec I was lonely and sad and angry I just needed a break Why do you stay so easy baby If I want you, I get If I want you, I get you quickly I don’t need you fck sake Oh, I kissed you once again On the lips, felt the same You’re disgustingly in my veins You stayed on, hidden far in my brain Now, I can feel the shame I am weaker than I claim They say forget about the past, they say forget about them all They tell me breathe it will be fine but deep inside there is a bomb (x2) I won’t let you come back you hear me Please let me come home (x4)
Cover-art by @onioniogre
I have some feedback if u wanna hear it!
Yeah I would be interested,
You can DM me or I don't mind you doing it publicly either.
The track is full of flaws that I know!
Thanks a lot for your time!
the lyrics are heartbreaking, if you ask me. Too many frustration is present, I'm sorry for that. I could assosiate it not necessarily with someone, but with an addiction. How it's easy to get that but hard to stop it, creating a toxic relationship between you and it. This is, lyrically, fire. And we don't even talk about the beat and voice (that are also fire 🔥).
Yes, you read through it ahah.
But at the end of the day it's cathartic, and I tried to make sound / have a fighting vibe still!
Thanks a lot for your review and rating man(o)!
noice, noice, mu m8...
awsum zong :P
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Thanks a lot m8 :V
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This is a really cool vibe!
Thanks a lot Aalasteir!!! 🙏
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