The idea for the logo is good. It should be a bit more consistent and thighter, in my opinion.

I fieddeled around a bit and this was the tweaked version I came up with.

I would say keep on posting. You have 300+ fans that will see your art anyway. You also can be seen in the not scouted section. Less traffic, but also less high quality competition.

In my opinion having fans are more important to get views than the art portal.

To message a mod might be a good idea to get a handle on what you might want to avoid doing for the future.

I do agree that a notification about unscouting would have been a reasonable thing to expect. NG doesn't seem do that. I don't know why. Possibly a notification is expected to generate more negative responses, than not having a notification at all?

Welcome to NG.

You might want to start with looking over the forum rules.

https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/forums/forum-rules

including the one about putting your thread in the correct forum. "Where is/How to/Help" might have been a more correct forum in this case.

You have obviously found the "Create New Topic" button top right on the forum page or the "New Topic" button top right:ish in a thread (computer version, might be different in phone). Both starts a new thread.

In the thread set Ratings for the intended content of the thread, E,T,M or A. 

Replying to a thread can be done 2 ways. The "Respond to this Topic" button, top right in the thread or the "Reply" button at the bottom right of a post. Something that is intended as a reply to a specific post is best done with the "Reply" button. This will notify the author of the post. If you intended to answer a certain post but use the "Respond to this Topic" the risk is that the author of that post will not see your answer.

It pays to check if there already is a thread with the question/subject you want to make a thread about. A number of questions tend to be repeated time after time. Responses to "repeat" threads can on occasion be a bit salty. But mostly this is a fairly friendly place in my experience.

W sitting

Ahh, Those where good years for comics. (and don't forget the 60's and 70's)

You are not quite there yet, but the panels are clear and easy to read. I like the inks.

Below I have changed the balance between the panels for one page to make it more dynamic. It is all about making the fist punching thru the ice feeling as powerful as possible. Breaking thru the panel does a lot of lifting here. This is gimicks that, in my opinion, should not be overdone, but that are well motivated in this case.

Note that I have moved the textbox in the second panel. This is to help the eye have a smooth path traveling thru the panels. Having to go to the bottom of the panel to get the text don't work as well.

I hope there is something you find useful in this.

Looks pretty good to me. Maybe turn the brigtness of grass and trees down a few notches.

(The GIF might not work in the thread because there is a size limitation. If the file is too large, it will not run, I think I read at some time).

Do you mean adding a link to one of your uploaded images? You can do that with just adding the adress of that upload

"https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/blatero-sempre/torre-occhio"

without " " and you get this

Sweet Ann

miss Bones 2026

Also sent link to dump with zip file with the image without background.

Jacqueline White, pilot and adventurer, sporting her trademark purple blouse.

Will this work?

I also have larger version, if that is preferable.

Starting to work on a new episode of my comic, An Inside World

I will need an airship using balloons in this so I've started with constructing that.

First sketch

A quick 3D model

Colored drawing

It is a start

[DRAWING EwanDoggieNG's OC Molly]

It feels to me that the elements in your image are pulling in different directions.

Here I am trying to get everything going in one direction.

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I did a quick redraw of one of your characters. I hope you see something useful in that.

Pretty good.

Made a few tweaks, mainly about proportions. Nothing really big.

So, the main trouble in my mind with your image is that the lips determines the placement of the teeth.

In my image I start with the gums, to determine the position of the teeth. And decide the placement of the lips after positioning the teeth.

I hope this was helpful

"This doesn't really fit into pulp or magazine era"

Well, #10 of Classic Comics (later renamed Classics Illustrated) was a telling of Robinson Crusoe in comic book format and it was first publiced in 1943, so there you could (sort of) connect it to the Golden age.

What kmau said +

Storyboarding is something different

So this is a first rough storyboard for a video I have started to make

It's purpose is to break down what scenes I will need for the video.

Story boards are often used for live movies or sometimes even for theater. It can be used to plan a comicbook too.

The actual art for the video will not be drawn on top of the storyboard thumbnails.

The hair is good as hair. But don't look like afro to me. But then again, I am not an expert on afro hairstyles.

Perhaps something like this might work

OH yes. Classic Pulp character. Very Nice.

This is getting ridicules. They keep coming. They are not even waiting to have one account deleted before sending a near identical message from a different account.

I would suggest a more expressive pose and bolder lines. Maybe something like this.

Avoid poses where the left and right mirror each other.

This part in the guidelines might be useful to you to evaluate if your 3d art might contain (too much) 3de party assets to be allowed on NG.

https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/art-guidelines

Scene Creators, Third Party Assets

Do not submit images made from other people's assets or from scene creator programs.

This includes art made with Source Filmmaker; if you did not create the character models, please do not share your piece in the Art Portal. If you are creating your own models and your work is removed, PM Tom. Also be careful not to produce the art equivalent of shovelware, by uploading large numbers of similar entries to the Art Portal. Activity such as this lead to a growing community backlash against SFM.

Any 3D assets not modeled by the uploader should not be primary elements of your piece and should be credited and linked to when possible, to help us determine if the submission is suitably original / transformative. In general Daz3D entries aren't allowed because they are largely composed of pre-existing assets. This is another situation where we became less lenient over time due to the ability of people to flood the Art Portal with renders.

UnrealEngine's MetaHuman would similarly be treated as third-party assets, since the software is creating the model.

There are numerous scene and character creator tools beyond the ones listed above. Any software where you arrange pre-made assets is not accepted in the Art Portal. Examples include Koikatsu Party and Gacha Life.

I've had three of these, same identical text, including spelling mistake, but different senders (presumably new accounts as the previous accounts get blocked).

My take

"Could i use this as a reference?"

Yes, you can. I'm happy if this was useful to you.

I did a quick ink over of your image to have something to color.

So this a possible way to color this scene.